EV Chapter 1

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EV Chapter 1

Postby strekship » Sun Oct 19, 2003 4:35 am

Ok, here is my non-trek story. Tell me if you like it. I would like feedback both negitive and positive. It is in PDF format. It is also zipped. To download right click and click "save target as".
http://www.koolpages.com/strekship/Escape Velocity.zip

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Postby strekship » Tue Oct 21, 2003 10:17 pm

Gee, i guess this forum dosn't see many people.

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Postby Chaos Marine » Thu Dec 04, 2003 11:07 am

I tried to read it but your link brought me here: http://www.freehomepages.com/

If you'd like a higher chance of getting your stuff read then sign up here http://www.spacebattles.com

Plenty of good fics there as well.
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Postby strekship » Sat Dec 06, 2003 8:13 pm

ypu need to download the zip file to read it. Right click and click save target as.

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Postby Chaos Marine » Wed Dec 10, 2003 11:01 am

The story was ok, it was annoyingly vague at places and it's hard to keep interested in the characters. Some more discriptive text on objects and characters would improve it but don't bog down the flow with excessive explanations either.
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Postby strekship » Fri Mar 05, 2004 3:27 am

Thx for your input.


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